by David Feb 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
As he watched her all day |
by June
Very well written ,your a very talented writer.Does he find the courage to approach her ? |
Great job... I love how they end up together in the end.. how sweet... I wrote a similar poem, only it was different.. lol, but anyway, back to the poem. It's emotional and very lovely. Flow and everything are superb as usual.. lol, I was attempting to find another synomn for awesome, but I've come up short, lol. 5/5 as always my friend |
Aww you are truely a good poet!! i fully love all iv read so far. well done |
by Kaila
Omg I wish boys thought about me that way lol write part 2 chop chop lol i loved it your great |
by Kalee
I loved the poem. It is soooo sweet. He really needs to tell her how he feels. That is sort of how I feel about the guy I like. I didnt have the guts to ask him out for a year. Then i finally did it and now i am waiting on his answer. |