The hairs on his back stand up
She is watching me, with a look

THe me needs to be a him to keep with the perspective. All in all a great setop for the next installment. Cant wait. Well done

Aw.. I love this poem. It's really sweet. Overall it had a really good flow. Great read! 5/5

marcella

I loved the poem. It is soooo sweet. He really needs to tell her how he feels. That is sort of how I feel about the guy I like. I didnt have the guts to ask him out for a year. Then i finally did it and now i am waiting on his answer.

Anyway, great poem. I loved it. 5/5

Kalee

Omg I wish boys thought about me that way lol write part 2 chop chop lol i loved it your great

Aww you are truely a good poet!! i fully love all iv read so far. well done

much love and many kisses,
bex

Great job... I love how they end up together in the end.. how sweet... I wrote a similar poem, only it was different.. lol, but anyway, back to the poem. It's emotional and very lovely. Flow and everything are superb as usual.. lol, I was attempting to find another synomn for awesome, but I've come up short, lol. 5/5 as always my friend
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Very well written ,your a very talented writer.Does he find the courage to approach her ?