Gods sent

by TiMe hEaLs aLL wOuNdS   Feb 17, 2007


I was running and running
with nowhere to go
no longer wanting to live
and didn't want anyone to know

acting like someone i wasn't
which was a sad part of me
then you entered my life
you made me who i wanted to be

you accepted me for who i was
and not for what i had
you took me in without a second thought
with all good and bad

i hoped god would send me
someone to complete me and make me whole
he gave me you the complete package
heart and soul

i wanted an angel
to come and take me away
he sent me someone
who actually made me want to stay

you were my prayers answer
and i am very happy to be together
i love you baby
and with you i want to spend forever!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aww so cute! this person obviously means a lot to you i hope everything goes well for you to : ) <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    I really like this poem, great emotion and wonderful sentiment. Nice use of imagery to keept he readers attention all the way through. There are alot of very similar poems out there, but this comes across as truly heartfelt.

    My only critique qould be regarding the stanza below ...
    "i hoped god would send me
    someone to complete me and make me whole
    he gave me you the complete package
    heart and soul"

    The last line of this stanza didn't seem right to me, it was too short. "Body, Mind and Soul" is possibly a better way to end this stanza.
    Still a very nice poem, well worthy of a 5
    Nice work.
    [5/5]
    ~Pete.

  • 17 years ago

    by Elapsed

    WOW!!.. this one brought a tear to my eye!!.. awesome job!.. and grats on finding that someone :)

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