Comments : Gods sent

  • 17 years ago

    by Elapsed

    WOW!!.. this one brought a tear to my eye!!.. awesome job!.. and grats on finding that someone :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    I really like this poem, great emotion and wonderful sentiment. Nice use of imagery to keept he readers attention all the way through. There are alot of very similar poems out there, but this comes across as truly heartfelt.

    My only critique qould be regarding the stanza below ...
    "i hoped god would send me
    someone to complete me and make me whole
    he gave me you the complete package
    heart and soul"

    The last line of this stanza didn't seem right to me, it was too short. "Body, Mind and Soul" is possibly a better way to end this stanza.
    Still a very nice poem, well worthy of a 5
    Nice work.
    [5/5]
    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aww so cute! this person obviously means a lot to you i hope everything goes well for you to : ) <33