It's brilliant. Dark, beautiful, and full of imagery. And such an interesting style, good job.

"Rose thorns,
stuck in my throat.
If you love me,
I can only cry in return.
Speechless.
Cursed."

^^My favourite part of the poem. It's beautiful..just like the whole piece is.
I don't even know what I could say that could even begin to sum up what I feel about this piece...I don't think mere words would do it justice.

This is frigging amazing.