Ok! Please dont be offended as I think the Haiku is very very good .
I cant type that . Very well done!!

I really like haiku's, i tried writing one once and well... it didnt go so well. Lol. But this one, really liked it. It was really sweet. I dont read love poems often but this one was well worth reading. It made me smile. Your punctuation was great, and it shows real talent. Your peoms are really amazing. Keep writing! xx

This was a very good poem haiku's are very good reads i have written a few myself but i dont have them on here yet, you did a wonderful job writing this i loved it 5/5