Miss

by Daniel R Rodriguez is the star of my eye i love him so much   Feb 17, 2007


I miss you like crazy!
I miss you my baby.i miss you when I'm sleeping. I miss u when I'm awake. I miss u for goodness sake. I miss all the times we tried. I miss all the times i cried. I miss you when i see you with her. I know that for sure. I miss you baby. Help I'm going crazy. I miss all our kisses. I miss all your wishes. I miss all your sweet smiles. when we use 2 sit on the tiles. I miss when you use to say baby i love you. I know that was never true. I miss you when i think of all the things you put me threw. I should of knew. I miss your sweet voice. But you made your choice. Please help me i miss you to much!I still love you a bunch.

HEY I WROTE THIS AND I HATE IT BUT PLEASE TELL ME HOW MUCH U LIKE IT!
~~~~~meg~~~~~

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  • 17 years ago

    by Daniel R Rodriguez is the star of my eye i love him so much

    Thanx it really helped me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    The general idea of this poem was good but if u want my honest opinion i think it wud be so much improved by seperating the lines a bit and making stanzas. also u used some of the rhymes twice which is ok but just makes the poem seem less original, i give u 3.5/5 (but u cant get that so i'll round up :D )

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