by Heba Feb 17, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
What would i be without my friend |
Not quite what I expected but I could tell you put some effort into it. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by Drew Gold
Good ideas but you should add some stuff; give examples or something. and maybe use Images to convey what you're feeling. Otherwise this just looks like you're talking to a friend, not so poetic yet. Poetry is about sharing experiences through words, so kinda step back, maybe, and think: What's the best way to describe this to where if a stranger read it they'd get a sense of ewhat i meant, how i felt, even what I was thinking (without exactly syaing it) |
Cute poem short but to the point :) |