What wud i be without my friend

by Heba   Feb 17, 2007


What would i be without my friend
the one who always smiles
will our fun never end
i hope it stays a while

where would i go without a pal
someone to say its OK
how will i survive at all
without a friend there everyday

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXDurrTYSOutHXx

    Not quite what I expected but I could tell you put some effort into it. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Good ideas but you should add some stuff; give examples or something. and maybe use Images to convey what you're feeling. Otherwise this just looks like you're talking to a friend, not so poetic yet. Poetry is about sharing experiences through words, so kinda step back, maybe, and think: What's the best way to describe this to where if a stranger read it they'd get a sense of ewhat i meant, how i felt, even what I was thinking (without exactly syaing it)

  • 17 years ago

    by proudmommyto2girls

    Cute poem short but to the point :)

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