Lovely use of language. Why the low rating? It's not valid. Well done with this.

Hi,

In your writing it's obvious English isn't your "mother tongue" therefore grammar and word format is a little off, but nevertheless it's understandable.
The subject was a little cliche for me eg "angels" and such, but it was sweet anyway.
Thanks for your comment (and message) about my poem.
Take care,
Silver J.

This is quite beautiful. a true love poem. i agree with silver j, there were a few gramatical errors but that will improve with time =]. keep up the great work!

I like this poem :) I can see that you prise this person that you are writing about very much!

You are the moon of seven islands and whole planet
You were created from angel's material

Coincidences that bring you are lucky
Lucky person who see you all the time

Lovely poem but these lines are really wonderful !!

5/5
Have a wonderful life ever !
Cheers
Salam o Alekum.
Biya

You are the moon of seven islands and whole planet
You were created from angel's material

Coincidences that bring you are lucky
Lucky person who see you all the time

Lovely poem but these lines are really wonderful !!

5/5
Have a wonderful life ever !
Cheers
Salam o Alekum.
Biya