This was sad. You did a wonderful job making your point. Take Care Cindy

I think this is something we can all relate to. I try not to struggle though. It just isn’t helpful, plus it takes my attention away from the many little beauties of life.
Sometimes the harder path does more good to us than the easy one. but you’re quite right. I agree with you about the last stanza. The majority of people are like that. ‘tis sad.
thanks for again sharing your poems with us :)
Marjan

Great concept. i liked the 'inner dialogue' aspect. i felt a lot of frustration. i really enjoy your style. similar to mine. :) 5 for you! -beav

Very nicely written, and had a wonderful messege within. I can relate and I'm sure many others can as well. The flow as well as the structure was good. Can't wait to read some more from you. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

Great poem Jarrod, as always. I really loved the meaning behind it. Great way of expressng it tho. Well just wanted to stop by. U take care-n i dont even kno if u remember who i am. but anywho lol. Take care again. Later. >>>>5/5.