Wow that is so sad and has so much meaning. i know how that feels. i am in the same position. comment one of my poems
5/5

xx.chelsea.xx

I wrote one, for my mum too

I know how you feel. My grandfather died when i was three months old. so i never got to know him. it was wonderful and sad.

Kalee

Awwwwwww ..i hope this poem isnt true.. if it is im sorry to hear that... good poem!

Very sad. It has a lot of emotion running through it. Great write! 5/5

marcella

So sweet and sad. losing a parent, at any age isn't easy. my dad died when i was 25. so horrible! i've been wanting to write something for him, but i haven't been able to- yet. i will though, when it's time. excellent poem. so sorry for your loss. keep your chin up! -beav

This has so much emotion. this was really sad, i wish no1 had to ever say goodbye. cause then ppl are sad. and i don't want that.

great poem! i really got into it.

5/5 David

You're 14?? Your writing syle is very mature!
I'm sorry you lost your dad. I can tell that it's very painful.
I don't think the pain will ever go away but I think you'll find ways to handle it.

This is very sad and full of emotion its short but it seemed like it told a novel

Amazing job, like i said before i'm so sorry about your father.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Thats an amazing poem, its so full of emotion, I'm so sorry about your father....keep on writing, isn't it a great way to vent?....:/ well I really liked this poem and I can only imagine how you must feel....

Short felt it could've been a little longer, again use puncuation it makes the poem that much better. Great write.

Second line first stanza, "couldve" should have an apostraphy so it reads, "could've"

Last line first stanza and last line second stanza, "lye" should be, "lie"

Fourth stanza second line, "your" should be, "you're"

Peace, Joe