I liked this a lot, good imagery.

Very nicely done. Great flow and diction.

Hey! I haven't read any of your new poems for a long time, so I thought I'd check in. Are you still in EOP?

This was a nice poem! I escpecially liked the line "Do you see the flames that flicker as the crackle breaks the night." - Excellent rhythm, and A nice visual. The flames as "little dancers" was very cool, as well. You seem to have found the style that suits you best... right (or 'write') on!

The title is what caught my eye right away. And than the poem just about made me cry haha, why I do not know but it really did. It just reminded me of something...you have an amazing talent Dear, and I am sure that you hear that a lot. ^_^

Wow a beautiful writre once again, as lush fcuk says, the title is very eye-catching. the word choice is really good too, and forces the reader to want to read on. is devine another way of writing the word divine? im not really sure, jus wondering. anyway great work hun 5/5
nuff luv xx

U r very good with the imagery keep it up!!!

Good, in a rather odd way. It didn't seem to rhyme, it didn't seem to flow and yet it did both somehow. This poem ends at exactly the right moment, too. Wonderful peice! I love it, it's one of my favorites.