This is similar to the music video to My chemical romances song the black parade

Any my chem. reference in a poem, is a 5/5 poem! great job.

Very nice Dan ; D glad to see ur love for my chem is untainted. Lol.
Till death do us part, babe.

Xoxox

YOU SAID MY CHEM!!!!!!!!!!!
GLARRRRRRR

it was good, needed a little fine tuning with the rhyme and flow. But otherwise good.

GA