Comments : Art and Creation

  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Your writing may be getting short but the impact in the sentences is increasing. I liked the difference between north and south. It was brilliant imagry and alas now I have no more to say :(

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job! This works with so few words. Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by umbra

    I'm sorry I don't follow it. Writing is mostly for the enjoyment of the person writing, but if you want to write for others you need to be sure they will understand you. This poor retard does not.