Wow!
This is great. The imagenary is wonderful! Attention grabbing. I loved what you did with this.

Now that's scary....good thing I know the real you. :)

Wow I really enjoyed it! It was so dark and almost scary. You did a gra job with your use of words. The flow was very good. The rhymes were good. You did an amazing job! I'll be reading some of your other poems.

Keep writing!
Cayce

Wow that's something i would love 2 do. this poem makes me smile. keep writing i LOVE it!!!!! :P