Comments : The Best I'll Have

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This was a beautifully written poem i really liked it ur a great writer keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. its sweet. i loved them rhyming, but the first stanza rhyming didnt fit the rest of the poem. there was also this one part that could be fixed,
    "Sneaking out your window into your room."

    well. if your sneaking out of the window you would be going outside....so how does that all work... reread it.

    overall 5/5.