Comments : Take Me Away [Acrostic]

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Wow thats beautiful! my favorite line :

    Keeping to myself, it hurts so much
    Ever longing for your touch

    so true! ^^^ love it, keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is so beautiful ciao, i love acrostic poems and this one is perfect, as always i give it a 5/5!!! keep writing babe!!! miss yall at the club!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loooove this so much.
    Well you obviously already knew that or I wouldn't have iven you first place haha.
    Seriously though, I think you did an amazing job with this, the wording is beautiful, the flow flawless, and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    LOVED it. i expecially loved:

    Angels and demons will no longer haunt
    You are baby, the only one I want
    that was such a great ending! and i absolutely love it. excellent job! 5/5