by debbylyn Feb 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
A Poem's kiss |
by Jenni Marie
In all honesty, I wasn't to keen on this one. It was like I couldn't feel the depth or emotion...Like you were holding back a little. while it certainly wasn't terrible, I think you have done better. |
by nai
Such a lovely poem, its such a nice piece and flows so perfectly |
by Renan
Beatfull writting |
by Barry
This poem will run and run.... |
by David
I loved the ending. for this poem ended just right. i loved the way it biult up to it. bravo! |