Killing me

by The Girl From Yesterday   Feb 18, 2007


As I see you with her
My eyes fill with tears.
I thought I knew her
All these years.

How could I,
Have been so wrong?
Why did it take me,
So dang long?

She's nothing but a liar,
But a good one at that.
All those things I did for her,
I wish I could take back.

I'm the one who loves you
How can I make you see?
Seeing you with her
Is killing...me

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  • 15 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    "dang" > pfft, how american, LOL =]
    And maybe on the last stanza you could move the ellipsis to like, make it more hard hitting?
    "Is killing...me"
    [...is killing me]
    [Is killing me...]

    But other than that, I like it. Short and to the point.
    If it's true, I'm really sorry =[
    5/5
    ~FountainsOfBlood

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