I just want to say that this poem is only meant to rhyme in some parts. Thanks!

This was a very clever way of writing. I bet that if you hadn't put the note at the bottom, the part of arcrostic wouldn't have been found often. Nice work!

Wow,,, what a poem is this,,
i really like it ;)
good job

This was good especially for the structure that you chose. "And examining the angles" this was my favorite line so powerful and unique. Nice write.

I love acrostics
=]
And this one was very well written.
One thing though,
In the line...
"Siting there,"
"Siting" should be spelt "Sitting"
Other than that, this was perfect,
I really enjoyed reading this.
And the title was also very good.
Great job, Dear.
5.5

This is nice the flow and structure is really good. keep it up. you have a great gift for poetry.5/5

Again.. very deep and yet so powerful .. it touches me every whim.. I love it becasue I was able to feel the feeing sthat you feel I was able to read and picture the evnt that was occuring in that poem.. thankyou for makng me think twice about everythng.. and think even deeper. good job and keep up with your amzing work 5/5

This was well written indeed. It's poems such as this that make poetry great. You have talent. Not everyone can write like this. 5/5 without a doubt.