Your Eternal Soldier

by Marcus   Feb 19, 2007


I stayed up all night thinking of my boo
And I was wondering if you were thinking of me too
You're a goal in life I'm happy I no longer have to pursue
Life can be so hard but I know together we can get through

You Just don't know how much I care
I stayed up missing you; I even shed a tear
I know I love you cause losing you is a fear
and I spend so many endless nights wishing you were here

And one of the things I like about you the most
You're so far away but I still feel that we're close
Body and mind; we have a connection through both
You made me whole; from a couple of slices to a loaf

Even though you hurt me you were so easy to forgive
Probably because without you was so difficult to live
But now it is easier because all of the love you give
Now I'm happy because I once again have a reason to live

You help me keep in touch with my emotions while staying sober
You make me feel warmer even when the temperatures colder
We were meant to be so why would we ever want to be over
I'll protect you always I'll be your eternal soldier

Without you I can't smile, but without you I can cry
Without you I can't live, but without you I can die
With you I can't fail and with you I can succeed
With you I can't feel empty because with you I got what I need

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  • 16 years ago

    by Julie

    Very well written! nice job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    I guess it was okay...
    I didn't love it, this partially due to the rhyme scheme and the material itself. It reminded me of a card that you would buy at a pharmacy.
    I didn't hate it but I am not compelled to read it again.

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow, This poem is so deep and heart fulfilling.
    It is absolutely amazing! I think I will read more of your poems. I dont know something about your poems make me want to carry on though when I get to the end im disappointed..because I cant read anymore cause its the end xx Rox

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''Even though you hurt me you were so easy to forgive
    Probably because without you was so difficult to live''

    I adore those two lines...they are very hardhitting and intense.
    I really loved this poem...the first stanza was such a beautiful opener, with each stanza better than the last.
    Flow was flawless for the most part, but on the last part it seemed a couple sllyables of.

    Apart from that however, you did a beautiful job with this, I frikken love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily

    Absolutely excellent!! Before I read this poem it was hard imagining something so sweet coming from a guy- no offence. Stunning job!

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