The poem start out great . you lost it
after the word close. your poem
talks about how you feel everything
so change last part. come up with
another part about how you know
he loves you without him saying
so . tell what you think.
cy

What do you think of my ideal
don't change any thing ever if thats
the way you think is the best im
justing throwing ideals out . your
the poet and this is your poem
5/5

Yo get to typeing i miss your poems
i like the way u write lets go
cy

Yo doggggggggggg