by amoxi Feb 19, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
It was 6:30 when I woke up that day. |
"I got up and get dressed and was ready to got." it should say "I got up and got dressed" .. and im not sure but I thought that there were only two towers not three and you said the third tower. Nice work though the message in this was so sad especailly since a lot of people actually had to live through this and will continue to live with this the rest of their lives. Good job and very sweet message. |
A beautfully penned poem. I'm sure we all remember that day well, due to it's awfully tragic circumstances. It nearly made me cry, reading your poem. |
Wonderful. I loved the thought of this poem. You did a great job writing about the twin towers and saving some ones life. Very well written. 5/5 keep it up |
by Kaila
Omg... this is so terribly sad...I loved it you have a great artistic ability...it was very good and creative..you did a great job! |
by David
Oh well done on this poem. i read it, and was like oh this is a tribute to all that helped on the day. |