She's Dying Inside

by ashleeey   Feb 19, 2007


Beautiful scars,
Skin deep.
Sweet memories.
Not enough to keep.

Broken heart,
Ruffled hair.
Swollen eyes,
And nobody cares.

Pouting lips,
Ripped jeans.
Overworked mother,
Doesn't know what this means.

Crazy thoughts,
Attempted suicide.
Emotional fits,
She just wants to hide.

Listless eating,
Silent crying.
Lonely nights,
Because inside she's dying.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fluffy

    A profound piece with a strong message. Nicely structured and good use of rhyme. Try extending the sentences; it will turn out to read more effectively. Well done :)

  • 17 years ago

    by anna

    Great pome keep up the good work
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this poem is sad!=[ but it is still very good writing! i love it. keep uo the good work. i gave this poem a 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by anna

    Good job it flowed together nicley. keep up the great work
    5/5

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