Wow this poem was great its sad that she has to let go of everything that shes tried to hold on to, loseing control is never fun you're a great writer keep it up 5/5

I think this poem starts out amazing.. truely spectacular word choice.. however the last two lines dont fit.. the whole poem is adjectives your describing your emotions so well and then in the end.. the words are so simple and unpoetic..

Not bad, I like it, Some words I might switch up a bit but over all good poem, keep it up,=)

Wow! i loved this. it was powerful! i really liked these lines,
"Slipping like silk through my fingers
Letting go, one finger at a time"
It was beautiful! keep it up hun.
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

This poem wasnt as good as the first one i read but it was alright if you changed a few phrases it might sound better and have a better flow 4/5