Very short, but I loved it. Very well written.

This was a wonderful poem very well written it had a lot of emotion i really enjoyed reading it 5/5

Interesting.. i didnt think this was going to be a sad poem.. lol i know its under the sad catagory.. but i wasnt thinking.. but looking at the title.. it seems like a love poem.. its decieving... and i love it.. the flow was flawless.. and the emotions were god.. nice job :D

It's really beautiful, i, also thought it was going to be a love poem, but it was sad, which was what made it so beautiful, i really lovd it
luv gabriella

Awwww this is really good nice job!!

Hmm. the flow was really broken and i didnt get the last verse but i was able to feel the emotion, i thought you were writing this for me!! thats how much i can relate. thanks for sharing hun.
Much love and many kisses,
bex

Nice idea. Yet, some spelling threw me off. Cos makes your poem just seem slang. Because is a clean way to make it still as effective. I really liked the idea of the poem. Most of the time people always blame the other for the break up or what not. Loved your title. Very creative. I had a double-take when I first read it because you're used to seeing When Two Heart Become One. It was bittersweet.

Wow omg that was good 5/5

Wo this was a very powerful poem its almost the same as my relationship with my boyfriend except he walks all over me and i keep takin him back grrr men are ridiculous! it was a very well written poem great job 5/5