Falling child

by Mommy And Me   Feb 20, 2007


Shattering eyes
Gazing among the horizon
What do you see?

Smirking lips
Moving so gracefully
What do you whisper?

Majestic heart
Hidden beneath the soul
What is your secret?

Little child
Staring out that frosty window
Why won't you come and play?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    This is a VERY good poem
    i loved the flow and it
    all fit in

    "Majestic heart
    Hidden beneath the soul
    What is your secret? "

    this is the best part ^^

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    It is a very good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Terra dear, i liked this one. You have such an interesting writing style; it's very unique. I give it a 5/5 like Bryan did. c[:

    Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a very good poem terra, last sentence has a little typo in a word, i give it a 5/5!!! miss yall at the club, keep it up!!!!

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