I like dis poem,
it's good. nice work:)
keep it up
xx

This one was pretty good,
comment some of mine.\
i like ur quote, just do it and make it happen.

Thats really cute!! i loved it!..again another really great poem!..5/5 from me..can you comment some of my other poems haha thanks for the other ones btw ahaha

Instead of waiting for his decision, you better let go of him first before all else gets worse. Also, there are a few grammatical errors which should be fixed.
Other than that, it's a very nice piece.