Comments : Sitting here thinking why...

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Sweet! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    The pain of loss exists in many forms to us, this poem reflects a big one. good poem

    your servant:
    david

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    I love it!
    T
    his is my favorite part:

    What can I do? Nothing at all,
    I pick myself up but again I fall.

    Trying to move on is tearing me apart,
    Leaving an empty space in my heart.

    Woenderful job!

    Keep it up! :)

    nd take care!

    p.s. Ur in my favs! :)