HaHa! i love this poem! i hope any of this isn't true *but if it is i apologize for laughing*. very good work! i give it a 5!

Great poem absolutely loved it 5/5

That was so funny (sorry if true) and i luved the way you wrote it
seems you put thought into it....I'm FAT
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahaahahhahahahaahahhahahahhaahhahahaahah lolololololololololololol

Is this true?????sorry if it is but its a good poem!4/5

Lol, I like that. It's funny.