Revolution

Wow! This repetition made so powerful rhythm and you truly wrote this poem on a fantastic way.
Bravo, very remarkable and original piece, it is filled with intense overwhelming tone of revolution.
I enjoyed in every line, good choice of words too, very creative piece, well done.

I like the poem structure and the repetitive style. You truyl are a one of a kind writer and your talen tshines through with every write.

Love how you formed this piece. It really made me take my time with it and really absorb the words...

Hearts are stired with words such as these Tim. All that I can say is that this is a true masterwork.

Good to have you back.