Hello Loneliness

by Kalgalath   Feb 20, 2007


Lost in an abyss,
It seems I cannot speak
I long to fix this
Although I have become so weak

Where to start?
I cannot begin to conjure
I want someone with a heart,
One that is truly pure

A heart not stained,
Some shade of black
Someone not maimed,
From amorousness lack

I wish for an angel,
Someone near flawless
Someone who will not tangle,
An already torn up mess

Meaning my heart
Tied in many knots
The pain feels like a dart,
Piercing all my thoughts

No one being there,
To keep my heart warm
My body seems bare,
My heart, growing sore

I try to help myself,
But to no avail
Some put respect out on a limb,
But as I reach, I fail

Others seem not to care,
Whether or not I'm fine
I am speaking into the air,
When no one hears my cries

Can you help me?
I'll ask it again
Can you unfreeze me,
And keep me from this cold and bitter end?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.
    I was drawn to this because the title reminded me of a favourite song, and I'm glad it did.
    There was so much depth and emotion in this, though it was quite sad it made for an enjoyable read.
    I thought the flow was good and I enjoyed the wording.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow...so much emotion! i love it! 5/5 for sure your great
    *kaila*