This was great keep up the good work

Amazing. very deep. i like how u use ur words:)

You have an interesting way of writting, it's very different, but i like that

Omg.... i don't know what to say.
I can totally relate to this poem. Were this an Emily D! ckinson poem in the collection that i have, i would have put a slip of post-it note on that page to remind me one of my favorite ones by her is on that page.
Incredible, and i love how you used "naked breath"
it kind of gave me the chills...
or maybe it's the weather?
Incredible poem
5/5
~stephen white

Wow, great poem, uniqe style of writeing, very different, I like it, it is a little short, but it's still very nice, 5/5,