Awesome! You nearly broke my heart, but I love it! I bet a lot of peoplep wish for the same. I know I do!

Such a fantastic poem. If only more people thought like you do... Great job!!! 5/5

Josie

Good job!!...very beautifully penned.soo touching and lol.......there r a lot of ppl who wish for the same......well atleast i do!!.......Excellent work!!...kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Ps:I guess a typing error have occured towards the end of the poem...i think u can correct it if u revise your work...other wise the poem is Great!

I absolutely love this poem! great job
5/5
Kelsie

I loved everything about this poem =o]. i really love the flow. great job santana ;]

Powerful piece. Nice flow. 5/5