This was quite different than other fantasy poems I've read, but it's good. Very good.

Very much like a fantasy! I love it! You write so many good poems, and each one has it's own story. It's quite exciting!

I can connect with this poem in many ways. I am in this role play that has to do with this, and the way you wrote it, made me look back on all the good times! Thanx, and keep on writing!