Did she ever tell you how she felt? Good poem.

Beautiful..and sad..and and like everything else you write- hypnotizing. good job on this hunny!

love ya
Ally~

I guess it's fine but it doesn't give a unique twist to something already done. The words were a little bland...and the imagery wasn't perfect.
"You become a painful memory
And I will try to just think of you as a story"
I do like those lines though. It's okay but not great. The concept is what I didn't really like.
~Faith-less