Comments : Tears Are The Waterfall (edited)

  • 17 years ago

    by SomeRomanticGuy

    Great poem babe I love all the imagery you can actually picture the poem.

    =D

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Another good one. Although this is and will always be a cliche subject (sadness and crying) it could pass as something not so cliche.
    I think it's your original diction and perspective of it that makes it that.
    In your notes I admire your silver lining.
    In the second line of thr second stanza, the word monotonous is great, but having tone after it seems repetitive. Monotone means single tone, so in fact you said "single tone tone," if you know what I mean.
    Not bad at all though.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    And i did. the sadness was evident thru out this poem. the whole way thru. well done. hope your life did get better.

    5/5 David