Comments : Life's many outtakes

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's so true that when it comes down to it, it's the people we know and the little things in life that really make us who we are. amazing write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    It is about the moments that made you glad
    Or the ones that made you ecstatic
    And especially the friends you had

    Yes, that's what its all about. People should like you for who you are.

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow, i totally agree, you really get the message into the poem, 5/5
    luv gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    WOW! this poem is so true...we never really think about any of that...another great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This is a great poem. It holds alot of truth & it flowed really nice. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    Its very true, and you kept my attention very well put 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I really liked this poem. It is true, in the end of ones life no one remembers that they didnt have the right pair of shoes or they didnt fit in with a certain crowd, all the people remember is the good times they had with family and friends, its a shame though that still so many people dont realise this and continually push and live fake lives.

  • 17 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Well said. to me it sounded like its better not to be fake and to be actually real for the first time because when your fake you won't have much to know from when your real about yourself. your very talented and did a great job.

    keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Greatly expressed point. Truthful words, defintely. The last line, except, should be "have". Kudos!

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I LOVED IT.
    Extremely true.
    So many people don't realize that though.
    You did a great job with this poem.
    I loved it. :D

    Keep it up.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexandra

    Oh wow.
    That was a really good poem, I enjoyed reading it, it had a really good flow. You are a fabulous writter

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent

    Wow, This one is very interesting indeed. I really liked it, I love the concept and every details. especially the message on it. Its like an "Come as you are" phrase and not looking on others that they may say to you. It was great write.

    Keep it up
    Veamm

    Sorry for the delay.
    Thanks