It's so true that when it comes down to it, it's the people we know and the little things in life that really make us who we are. amazing write 5/5 |
It is about the moments that made you glad |
by firexdancer
Wow, i totally agree, you really get the message into the poem, 5/5 |
by Michelle18
WOW! this poem is so true...we never really think about any of that...another great poem! |
by Cella Bella
This is a great poem. It holds alot of truth & it flowed really nice. 5/5 |
by w!th0utyou
Its very true, and you kept my attention very well put 5/5 |
I really liked this poem. It is true, in the end of ones life no one remembers that they didnt have the right pair of shoes or they didnt fit in with a certain crowd, all the people remember is the good times they had with family and friends, its a shame though that still so many people dont realise this and continually push and live fake lives. |
by Katlynn
Well said. to me it sounded like its better not to be fake and to be actually real for the first time because when your fake you won't have much to know from when your real about yourself. your very talented and did a great job. |
by MemoirsOfMe
Greatly expressed point. Truthful words, defintely. The last line, except, should be "have". Kudos! |
by Teria
I LOVED IT. |
by Alexandra
Oh wow. |
by Veamm
Excellent |