We pass each other almost every day
Not once do I stop to speak
I get so scared that you'll find a way
To uncover the secret I keep.
^^^
I knew by reading this very first stanza that I must grab the tissues. This poem just grips my heart Auntie.

Wonderfully penned as always Jeannie!

4th stanza, 4th line I think you meant truth.
I also loved your Spring poem and I am off to comment it now...

Take care
Luanne

A wonderful poem in which I can relate to a lot. In fact if I was a talented writer like yourself i would've mistaken it for something that I would've written. thank you for the great read!
5/5

Wonderful write.
You seem so content with your life as it is
Filled with women and all of their charm
But each night as I lay in my lonely bed
I dream I am laying inside of your arms.
Excellent job on this poem. I loved the story told here.

So I go through the day with glances of you
And the knowlege of all, I don't speak
I find comfort in this for the end of the day
Will cover the secret I keep.

Great story and sounds so similar to mine until I couldn't hold back anymore and I wrote my first secret poem to him.
Excellent.

Wow, this is really good, you're so talented! i luv the rhyming and the story you're telling, great job!
5/5!

Wonderful...

Aww.this poem was real sweet and i enjoyed reading it, although the rest of the poem from the second stanza was quite predictable, the flow was constant, so keep up the great work
nuff luv xx

Argh... the saddness of unexressed love. :) I have a similar poem I wrote with Sam (Blank Words) of people who worship from afar. Very sad. Brilliant poem tho.

(Just one small thing - in stanza four you have a typo "trueth").

Great job - haven't been disappointed with any of your poems!!

Mo
xx

Oh!!!!!!!! hOw i lOve this woRk of yours!!!!
I luV it!!! I luv it!!!! iT really reminds me of sOMethIng!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like your poem its very good xxx

Hey thanks so much for ur comment on my poem: it meant so much :)!
i love the wide range of diff poems that u write, and i understand the topic in this one...ive felt exactly the same, i esp like the 1st stanza...thats a secret i try to hide every day too! :( xx

Fantastic! Good rhythm, and it almost didn't seem to flow at first to me. Good job.

An awesome poem! I can relate to that a lot. I love the rhymes. Great job! 5/5

Wow!
that was great..
i totally understand where your coming from
being scared to show your feelings
i did that for 3 months once..
i totally rel;ate to this
well done

Marissa

Wow .
i totally love this .
can totally relate to this .

:D

Talent here......like the lines, story....and the flow....... mmmmm 5

I rate ur poem every time i re read it and it makes me feel good..
this is so my fav poem in this network...!!