Another very good poem... very sweet... well done :] xx

Tammie, well done. this was excellent and the way it was portrayed was perfect.

5/5, oh yeah. lol. David

I love the poetry form tanka its not as easy as it looks though, But you did a really great job with this The emotion was strong and flowed really well throughout the whole poem. Definitly an amazing little poem you have here. Really great job ~mel

Oh my wow.
I've done most of your
Formatted poetry.
Lol.
I LOVE IT!

Dude, if you continue on in what you're doing.
You're going to be added to my faves list.

Your poetry is easy to read.
Calming.
You have potential to be the best.