It don't rhyme no. but still is a great way to say a poem. so short yet perfect.

5/5 always David

A very nice poem... short yet very powerful... well done xx

That was a very well written Tanka poem =] 5/5

This is a very different style of writing, I enjoyed it! Great write, 5/5

I gave a 5/5 since haiku's like that are tough.

I loved it tammie. and that the way love is, till death do us part.

5/5 always David

I learned something neww, gr8 poem,, janaynay

Great poem, short but to the point

I think this was really cute, and you did a good job at wording it really well hun. Very nice poem. I enjoyed it.

Hmm...
It's weird.
50% of people in the US break that promise.
They get divorced.

So I liked how you wrote a poem about it
And bolded the fact that once you make a promise, you keep it.

5/5 :]