She Wants Revenge

by *~elika~*   Feb 21, 2007


Her name used to be Game-la
As in from the flower gumamela
Her mother loved that flower
So she named her daughter after it
Shame she was killed with Game-la to witness it
Then Game-la became Cypress
As in the one that symbolizes death
She knew who killed her mother
She knew who started the pain
She knew how to get him for she knew his name
To tell you the truth she did not have to search to learn it
For almost every child knows its father’s name
It was easy for her to find him
For he still lives in the same house
The house where her mother died
The house that started the pain
Too bad she couldn't find it in her heart
To kill the man her mother loved, boohoo

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  • 17 years ago

    by pilar ann

    You're cracked confused! This is such a great poem! I love the twist! Keep on writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by pilar ann

    You're cracked confused! This is such a great poem! I love the twist! Keep on writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Haha.. great begining bad ending. but still nice... i like my meat medium rare. but still there's always mad cow you godda worry about. xD
    it really went downhill from the top. but please keep writing. dont stop. with a little more practice you'll be great.

    anywhooo. it was.... you made it sound like she loved her mother. good. but... you also made it sound like she was gonna kill her dad... which she didn't . twist ending or whatever. if done corectly good. but in this case. you ruined the story. and wrecked the flow. not good.

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