by Maha Feb 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Another day ,another year |
by noha
Nice work its realy good i love it |
by hadia
Omgg thats so sweet. |
by noha
Nice one u have true love here |
WOOOW, how awesome and beautiful this poem is, i love it, so powerful so beautiful and full of emotions...very nice job made on this one...even the title was chosen perfectly... |
Nice poem, you seem to haave a good idea. And I love the topic. I just want to say all the paragraphs are not the same as in syllables, and the rhythm. I myself am not to picky on this, but if the flow doesn't sound good then it's just not right. I hope that wont bother you too much. Other than that, great write! |