Nice poem, you seem to haave a good idea. And I love the topic. I just want to say all the paragraphs are not the same as in syllables, and the rhythm. I myself am not to picky on this, but if the flow doesn't sound good then it's just not right. I hope that wont bother you too much. Other than that, great write!

WOOOW, how awesome and beautiful this poem is, i love it, so powerful so beautiful and full of emotions...very nice job made on this one...even the title was chosen perfectly...

well done

Nice one u have true love here

Omgg thats so sweet.
like seroiuslly, i can sooo relate to this poem.
i love it, and i think you are a great writer(:
i am so adding this to my favorites(:

Nice work its realy good i love it