Lonesome breath

by Annette   Feb 21, 2007


I cant stop crying
I cant stop the pain
I cant get rid of this
I cant win this game

Im alone in my heart
Im hollow inside
Even he cant help me
Im always going to hide

I cant feel my face
Its dying a slow death
All thats left
Is my last lonesome breath

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  • 17 years ago

    by DBM

    This is pretty good. I can definitely tell that there are feelings behind it. The only thing that bugs me is the lack of apostrophe's, but hey, we all have our own styles.

    Best of Luck!

    *DBM*

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