by Laura
Oh cuddles it was such a asad poem...you captured the pain suffered by those lost to the disease gracefully....i myself had many friends who battle this disease...I blame the media for putting this notion in women's heads that we must all be slim figured...it just isn't right! |
by OHgreenman
Wow! That's all I can say is wow! I'm at a loss for words. Wonderful!! |
by Melissa
WOW, this was one powerful poem. The rhymes were beautiful, not at all forced. The message is wonderful, yet heartbreaking. You did an amazing job with this piece, excellent work! |
by Chelsey
Cudds.......I haven't read your poetry in ages and when I do, I love how I come back to something so poweful as this...That last stanza was absolutley amazing!!..I mean..wow!!! I'm speechless... |
Exquisite write, excellent, wonderful job Mary |
by Angie
A beautifully sad but powerful write! What more can I say, I'm speechless.... |
by Melissa
*High Five* |
Oh my god, this piece is so beautiful and sad at the same time. |