Comments : Dance With Angels

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Oh cuddles it was such a asad poem...you captured the pain suffered by those lost to the disease gracefully....i myself had many friends who battle this disease...I blame the media for putting this notion in women's heads that we must all be slim figured...it just isn't right!

  • 17 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Wow! That's all I can say is wow! I'm at a loss for words. Wonderful!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    WOW, this was one powerful poem. The rhymes were beautiful, not at all forced. The message is wonderful, yet heartbreaking. You did an amazing job with this piece, excellent work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Cudds.......I haven't read your poetry in ages and when I do, I love how I come back to something so poweful as this...That last stanza was absolutley amazing!!..I mean..wow!!! I'm speechless...

    This is happening to girls right now and its so sad that they don't realize they don't have to do what they do. I think my friend is turning this way and its starting to scare me and reading this makes me want to talk to her about it. I loved this write! Excellent!
    Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite write, excellent, wonderful job Mary

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    A beautifully sad but powerful write! What more can I say, I'm speechless....

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    *High Five*

    Definately one of my faves! ;o)

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh my god, this piece is so beautiful and sad at the same time.
    It's so touching, wonderfully written.
    First stanza is my favorite.
    Great job, 5/5.