Short and sweet but it gets your message across...my ultimate fav line was:
I've done those things. I hurt. I bled

it is just perfect! again I love your original style and the flow was undisturbed.

I have to agree that you have talent. Very emotional, sad but enjoyable to read.

JFSFSDFHSD.= Amazing. ;P This was just...wow. I reminds me so much of my ex. But he was too much. I just couldn't handle it. Anyways this was just great. I don't even know what to say.
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So why baby must you believe
The things you hear but do not see
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^^ Loved those! I can relate to this poem so much!!

-` Liz

This is Very well writen, and i understand tha controling boyfriend thing, and how no matter what they say or do, you'll always come back say i love you, very good girl.

Hey this was really good it describes what i just got out of perfect!!this is awsome girl!keep up the good work

It was a little hard to understand what you were talking about in each verse but it was good when i understood it

I really ejoyed this peom. Very good. 5/5

*claps* That was brilliant. Very well done...and really threw the meaning out there. You put down some very good words.

If he doesn't change, then you should leave him, because you not in a healthy relationship. Well anyways, this was a very emotional poem, even tho you did it quick I liked it.

I love you not for what you do
But who I am when I'm with you

you poem is so gr8.... specialy these lines. your wrk is good. and i loved it. take care

Ok... heres the thing i liked the poem but your better than i am but love makes us do crazy things...but dont get me wrong you are really good

I love this poem ive been there and am glad to see someone could out it into words

Awww.. this is soo sweet.. i love it.. and i LOVE the title... the whole idea is great.. and you describe your emotion well.. the reapeated line really brings emphasis to it.. wonderful job! :D

Very good i give you two thumbs up just read my poems like Us, when we are together, or murky july night

Dunno if this is still a prob but bring up his past. nobody's perfect. we live n today, not yestersay