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by Gem
I liked it =) You really showed a different side to it all. It's very relaxing and soothing. Nicely done 5/5 *Gem*
by Hatori
I really liked the topic of this piece, but some of the words were out of place. For example, in: The music flows through my veins, it fills every crevasse, every open space filling me up with pleasure, and hope. The last sentence seemed to need more to keep the flow going. This poem also reminds me of what you told me once before. Also, in this paragraph: The music continues to play, as my fingers continue to move. The ups and down, the peaceful notes. plays a melody so soft that angels must compete. The last lines seems out of place. Don't get me wrong, I like this piece, but these are just some pointers to make it even better! Keep it up! Hatori The Illusionist