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by MyDarkenedWings Feb 21, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
Pouring the hollowed tears again, Bleeding this hate that has been; Falling in dark holes, Burned by these hot coals; Fury enters my heart, In this start; Of broken lies, Unforgotten eyes; Monstorious hate, Locked into lost fate;
by Kendall
This is really good. its not purposely mysterious and not blunt although the flow could use a little work if things don't rhyme the way you think them, then maybe they weren't meant to :] poems don't need to rhyme good job