My Inspiration

by Romantic Lover   Feb 21, 2007


He enters the room
So gracefully and fine
Attempting to erase the thought
Wishing he was always mine

Oh, this is so wrong
The thought of him and me
There are complications galore
With him I can never be

But each time he appears
My heart begins to race
Consuming my inner soul
Haunted by his handsome face

He’s a diamond in the rough
He makes my heart sing
Inspiring me so much
Poetry, I began writing

Expressing my deepest thoughts
That flow through my heart
My feelings began to surface
Which were suppressed from the start

It was the poetic language
Which brought two hearts together
A love which is grown
And will be alive forever.

*Written for a Contest*

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  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is indeed a very beautifully written poem...could feel so much of emotions flowing right from every single word...loved it all the way indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    So you're falling in love with the wrong man, too. It's nice to know there's someone else out there who knows how I feel. I still care deeply for this one guy, but he clearly has moved on. This other guy walked into my life and saved me, and I feel attached to him, but I know deep down inside, I'll never be able to get over the first guy. My first love. I'll let you know if I figure out how to handle this situation!

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Awesome...great stuff

    Expressing my deepest thoughts
    That flow through my heart
    My feelings began to surface
    Which were suppressed from the start

    great line, my favorite keep it up and i apologize for just getting to read ur stuff but thanks for reading mine i appreciate it so much and ive added you to my favorites....

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Heidi

    It was perfect.. lots of love

    thank you for commenting. means so much to me

    <33 hb

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    One word: Beautiful!